yosu [e]
Waaa, even if the drawing is rough the story and plot is really good. I'm really addicted now!!!!
Thursday, January 17th 2008 - 10:12:45 PM

Chauntelle [e] [h]
Wow, okay.
I just totally fell in love with this.
I knew you wouldn't be updating anytime soon..
but i couldn't help my curiosity and read this whole thing in a day.
xD
i know..but i think the story line is perfect, but it's VERY HARD to tell who is who..like everyone looks the same. But! Very good drawing though. So if you will be starting over..i mean like i cant tell you what to do, but i don't think you should destroy it, but just re-draw all the characters and make it more easy to tell who is who!

Thank you for creating this!
It's amazing!
<3333

-Chauntelle

AIM: Punkgirlychaunty or Blondetacoz
Friday, October 5th 2007 - 06:46:31 PM

Jess [e] [h]
I am really sorry to hear that you will no longer be updating this =[
I loved reading this and am sad that I won’t get to read it anymore. But I suppose you have your reasons for doing so and there’s not much I can do about getting you to continue. But for what its worth I love this story. I really hope you do continue with it.
Will you continuing with the story version on LiveJournal?
Anyway I though I’d leave you a farewell comment, good luck with what ever you decide to do.
xxx
-Jess
Sunday, June 3rd 2007 - 01:25:48 AM

Jess [e] [h]
Whoa I haven’t commented in a while, >_< but anyway
^_^ Squeeeee! Updates! *grins*
I really like where you’re going with this, it just works so well. I know I’ve said it hundreds of times before but I seriously love your story. Yeah I can’t really think of anything else to say I’ve been reading too much today so my brains not working xD haha.
Have a good day ^_^
xxx
Monday, April 9th 2007 - 07:36:13 AM

Jess [e] [h]
^_^ I’ll post what I have done so far in my journal (it’s horrible and very crap)
Yeah so if you would read and give me tips or something on what I should do to make it a little better then it is I would really be appreciate it. (Providing you have time that is)
Actually I’m going to make a new LJ for stories and stuff, I really don’t want some of the people on my current LJ reading them, way to embarrassing.
Heh I’ve only done about a paragraph and I’m going to change the names because the people in it currently aren’t the original charters and I keep putting the original charters names in anyway so I might as well just change it xD haha.
Okay I’m now http://motokuro.livejournal.com/
Yeah and woot woot for the update xD heh.
I’m glad you like my comments, I enjoy leaving them.
Yeah I get what you mean, when I write I have to have some one narrate everything and it really annoying or I have to have the charters explain things when the reader can get the point I was trying to get across anyway.
Heh, yes you would like to think after what 3 years your drawing had improved xD heh, it has its much more detailed now, I mean it was awesome to start with but its a lot better now. (Haha I’m saying things like this and I can’t draw to save my life xD )
Anyway I think I have blabbed long enough xD
xx ^_^

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XD good luck on improving both your writing skills and drawing skills =3
~LL
Saturday, March 10th 2007 - 10:27:28 PM

Jess [e] [h]
Yeep! I've finally caught up with it all ^_^ took me what 5 days? Mmmm would have finished earlier if it hadn't been for damn school. Oh well 368 pages in five days isn't bad really. 73.6 pages a day xD haha. Anyway, I love how you have made Yoru have the split personally thing, that was just brilliant. (Sorry if you call it something else that was just the best way I could think to describe it) and Cain and Allen telling their versions of the story? Wow amazing. Heh sorry I'm probably over complementing again, I do that and people find it creepy. Apologies if you took it that way or anything.
Mmm just for interest sake you have inspired (for lack of a better word) me to take up writing and drawing again and I have done the charter profile for my story and every thing xD haha.
Oh and sorry about double posting last time I commented, my net went screwy.

Yeah I can't think of anything else relevant to say. But woot woot for Yoru and Chris's smexing scene xD
Update soon! [if you can] (Because I really can't remember what I used to do on the net before I found your story, sad huh?)
^_^

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Lol~ I'm honored to inspire such motivation in you XD. Were'd you post it (your current writing project), in your journal?
~LL
Friday, March 9th 2007 - 05:48:20 AM

Jess (again) haha [e] [h]
Lol at me fan girling. xD
I can’t have been the only person to shout “Sex him!” at the screen when Yoru and Chris had that moment at the end of chapter 14, can I? Heh.
My necks getting all-stiff again now I remember why I gave up read FanFiction or hour on end in January, oh well I’ll no pain no gain (or amazing story in this case xD) haha that kinda makes me sound really old doesn’t it? oh well.
But on a serious note your drawing has really improved, I can see I definite difference. Oh and it’s still awesome artwork too!
Yeah I’m really jealous of your writing ability, I try to write but I can’t seem to ever come up with anything good, so I’m jealous of people who can and can make it great!
I mean wow, you had a brilliant idea to start with but you just made it amazing. *claps for you*
Heh, yeah well that all (for now) ^_^ xx

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teehee~ I ish flattered very much lol. Yeah, my drawing has somewhat improved (it better had). As for my writing abilities... well, it isn't really all that great, I'm trying to improve my ability to stick in imagery instead of just dialogs, dialogs, dialogs you know? Haha~
~LL
Wednesday, March 7th 2007 - 03:26:02 AM

Jess (again) haha [e] [h]
Lol at me fan girling. xD
I can’t have been the only person to shout “Sex him!” at the screen when Yoru and Chris had that moment at the end of chapter 14, can I? Heh.
My necks getting all-stiff again now I remember why I gave up read FanFiction or hour on end in January, oh well I’ll no pain no gain (or amazing story in this case xD) haha that kinda makes me sound really old doesn’t it? oh well.
But on a serious note your drawing has really improved, I can see I definite difference. Oh and it’s still awesome artwork too!
Yeah I’m really jealous of your writing ability, I try to write but I can’t seem to ever come up with anything good, so I’m jealous of people who can and can make it great!
I mean wow, you had a brilliant idea to start with but you just made it amazing. *claps for you*
Heh, yeah well that all (for now) ^_^ xx
Wednesday, March 7th 2007 - 03:15:03 AM

Jess [e] [h]
Hi hi, it’s the only person who has commented in the last six months again! XD haha.
I’ve been reading for the last 4 hours straight xD told you I was addicted ^_^
Just yay at what’s happening now (up to chapter 11 for reference) and O.O at the charter development!
Still really loving this (oh whoa my opinion hasn’t changed in a day! that’s a bit special xD) yeah I’m probably going to leave you a comment like this every time I read more, hope you don’t mind (but who doesn’t like compliments?)
And no I don’t expect you to reply to them all (or any really haha) just say if you want me to stop and I will ^_^
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Lol~ I love reviews~ they're what drive me on to draw (and pressure me on not giving up lol)~ Thanks for your compliments, they make me very happy indeed XDD
~LL
Tuesday, March 6th 2007 - 04:40:48 AM

Jess [e] [h]
Wow, I stated reading your story on your LJ (which I came across completely by accident, but boy am I glad I did now!) and thought is was an awesome story then I found the link to this site and I have to say I’m completely hooked, I love your charters I think their all amazing (and kinda want to marry Allen heh) and the plots just genius.
I hope you never stop writing this because when you do I’ll probably cry.
Yup, I’m addicted. But very happily addicted ^_^ <33

P.S You’re an awesome artist too ^_^
Xxx

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XD lol~ thanks hehe... Right now I'm definitely writing more than I'm drawing, because it's easier to make character development and details with words hehe
~LL
Monday, March 5th 2007 - 04:48:58 AM

HikariNoTenshi [e]
Nice ^^ I'm a writer and not an artist, so I don't critique artwork, but your story is quite well done. Keep it up; I'm hooked ^^
Thursday, June 29th 2006 - 01:04:50 AM

Ayumi [h]
Well your artwork is good and the story is alright i prefer to buy manga but online comics are good to im enjoying it so far and its funny abit*happy smile*well good bye and good luck with updates what can i say its nt i update my site alot^^;;
Wednesday, May 3rd 2006 - 06:53:02 PM

astaroth
Oo
VERY nice....
interesting plot...
i like lucifer
^^
Friday, April 7th 2006 - 06:08:24 AM

Insane_Vampire_Maru [e]
omg! I loooooove your comic! like..seriously....im totally hooked on it! lol...I have your website on my "favorites" page ^^ heh, but yeah, your a really amazing artist! Keep it up! lol, cause your comic has really become my new addiction ^^;
Friday, March 17th 2006 - 07:21:49 PM

Lishan [h]
Yatta, another wonderful manga from the creator of "To Melt Ice withou Fire"!! Luv it so far! X'3
Monday, February 27th 2006 - 07:00:27 AM

Arxann
so.. if I get it correctly...
you're -lazy-...
Thursday, February 23rd 2006 - 10:55:23 PM

Lexy [e]
Very nice comic you got there :P

I just wanted to say that my birthday is May 16th :D your only... a year and 5 days older than me :P ^^;

Keep up the GREAT work

- Lexy
Monday, January 23rd 2006 - 02:53:38 AM

Julian
I love your comic! I was half listening to my music when I realise that Within temptations-"angels" is telling the point of views of Chris's victims! it was weird and funny!
Sunday, January 15th 2006 - 03:41:58 PM

Jordan
I loooove your comic!!! The art is great and the plot doesn't get boring or pointless...YAY!!! Keep it up XD
Tuesday, January 10th 2006 - 05:51:08 PM

Hannael
Hi.
I like your comic. It was joyous and interesting to read. :) Keep going!
Sorry my bad language, but i even try comment your amusing comic. :D ..
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You're english is fine for me. My english isn't that great either lol~ Thanks for the comment~ I enjoy reading them!
~Kuro Tenshi LL
Sunday, January 1st 2006 - 05:58:28 PM

jodi
woah! i stumbled across this comic completely by accident and im so glad i did! The art is really good, the plot is amazing and the background info is so well thought out! you'v done a brilliant job :P I love the site too.
keep up the good wrk ;)
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Thankies~ I spent a long time on ze plot XD the site layout was also a pain in the ass and I'm glad you like it~
~Kuro Tenshi LL
Wednesday, December 28th 2005 - 11:19:58 PM

creeper [e] [h]
i really enjoy this comic. although my computer only lets me read a certain few pages i cant really grasp the story line- the charicters are amazing and very unique in personallity, the artwork is brilliant. you should really continue this piece of work. i congradulate you on your success in this, kudos.
peace,
-creeper
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It's a shame your computer only lets you read a few pages (tried refreshing?) but I'm glad you enjoy it nevertheless X3 I'll draw more, don't worry =3
~Kuro Tenshi LL
Sunday, December 11th 2005 - 10:10:01 PM

Jose [e]
this comic is cool i enjoy reading it
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Thankies~ I'm glad you enjoy it X3
~Kuro Tenshi LL
Friday, November 25th 2005 - 09:57:47 PM

Broken Puppet
Just to say, I'm enjoying reading your comic ^_^
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Thanks for your support~ These comments make me very happy indeed
~Kuro Tenshi LL
Thursday, October 27th 2005 - 04:21:03 PM

Firefly [h]
W O W ! ! !
Your comic is so awesome! Art and story is just amazing! I could never come up with a plot like that!! Again, awesome!!! I think I'm gonna send you a fanart sometime... (when my stupid scanner starts working again XP)
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w00t!! an enthusiastic fan!! Yay!! I'm glad you like ze plot, since I revised it and spent much time thinking about it
~Kuro Tenshi LL
Thursday, October 27th 2005 - 11:28:47 AM

Luna Daimien Mystyra [e]
I love your comic... It's just amazing.... I found it yesterday and I just read through it... I know you don't know me... but your comic f***ing rocks!! I'm making a comic too.... but It'll never even be half as good as your... My comic aint even on the second page -.-" I soooo want to kill myself for that.... Anyhow... I'm not gonna bore you with a longer and stupider comment... Just gonna say one thing... "I'll be watching you"

Many good wishes for you from Luna Daimien Mystyra, the wierdo.
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This comment isn't annoying or boring at all!! Trust me, my first comics also sucked like hell, I had to throw them away. This is the first comic that I actually decided to finish and be patient with!
~Kuro Tenshi LL
Monday, October 17th 2005 - 04:06:24 PM

LoatheWolfSpirit [e]
This is… absolutely awesome! I love this angst in this and the characters personalities are well developed. I find Yuro and Chris very interesting. I feel really sorry for Yuro though, being used and about to be used again. Sometimes I want to whack Chris on the head, but you’re the creator and you decided what happens so I’ll just wait and read. Anyways, I only wanted to say that I really enjoy this comic. Um, about when are you thinking if updating? Not that there is any rush, I’m pretty patient. I’m just couriouse.

Well, have a great day and bye!

P.S You –beep–ing rock!
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Thanks~ I understand your urge to whack chris, and as my friend described him (There are two (lucky?) people who read my rough drafts) he's a "stupid machine". Lol. Glad you enjoy this humble supposingly-yaoi-but-i-guess-this-is -just-shounen-ai
~Kuro Tenshi LL
Friday, September 2nd 2005 - 08:39:11 PM

mandy cullen [e] [h]
hey, this comic is one of the best origionals I've ever read, nice job. I love Yoru and Scott. Scott is so funny. Anyway, keep going because this is great. Seeya at school.
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Thankies~ see ya at school too! And umm... happy belated b-day!!
~Kuro Tenshi LL
Thursday, August 18th 2005 - 08:22:47 PM

fallenangel [e]
in case you haven't noticed...it's me..i got to your school ,chs, and i am well aware of ur rough drafts..u showed them to me...
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oh. WHY ARE YOU COMMENTING THEN? J/K. too bad i've been gone for 10 days. and i love torturing yoru so this may be long. vilde manga shall come much later, but that also means better art.
~Kuro Tenshi LL
Monday, July 18th 2005 - 09:57:10 PM

Kaichi no lilly
Very cool manga/webcomic! Toltally dig how indepth the story, characterizations, and well, every thing is! I love your art style too.
Oh yes, and nice website layout as well! I've just started reading the manga today and I can't wait to read more of it.
Keep up the great work!
P.s. BTW nice music selection too...
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lol XD thankies~ I knew my music selection was nice lol X3 I'll try my best to update every other day.
~Kuro Tenshi LL
Monday, July 18th 2005 - 05:00:02 PM

Linnea [e]
weow, I just started to read your comic yesterday and I love it.
I wish I could draw so good. But bodies and faces and.. yeah, all of it, its so hard X) lol... I dont have enough time to practice -_-
my sister is drawing alot, one of her dreams are to draw a good webcomic. Just like yours.
anyway thats was not what I wanted to say. heh.
Keep up the good work^^
you're amazing.

(Heh, I just nocticed that you are born just 17 days after me.. cool X)
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hm... to say the truth, i can't draw bodies and i suck at drawing in different angles lol. i'm glad you enjoyed my webcomic XD it's getting pretty deep in my rough draft =3
i'm just sooo lazy and i have much to do =_=
~kuro tenshi LL
Monday, July 4th 2005 - 09:33:33 AM

fallenangel [e]
you really need to stick to the plot while giving me more pretty pictures of chris & yoru together ^-^ btw...school starts the 15th
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it will all connect eventually... I hope. I already got to the depressing part of the story on the rough draft. And my school is different than your school, it starts at August 9th because Fulton County in Atlanta sucks ass.
~Kuro_tenshiLL
Wednesday, June 29th 2005 - 11:19:41 PM

Fort [e] [h]
I don't think I've re-read a comic as much as yours. It's up there with my top ten favorates! Your characters are hot and the storyline is amazing. I'm also green with jelousy at your art-style. Keep it up! :) A part of me would die if it were to stop your comic! ;)
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::bows:: I am glad you enjoy my humble yaoi XD
I shall update every other day. Oh, and beware of the sudden mood twist coming soon, I was suprised by it myself.
--Kuro Tenshi LL
Sunday, June 26th 2005 - 01:28:35 PM

Aiko [e]
I absolutely -love- your comic! I didn't go to bed until 5 am last night because of it..but I have no regrets! Please update soon! <333
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o_O ::ish flattered:: XD I'm glad you like itsh XD i just updated, and i shall update every other day
~Kuro Tenshi LL
Wednesday, June 22nd 2005 - 01:34:06 PM

Ankira
Lol I want him to kill them so bad or atleast scare the crap out of them but oh well its your comic, and a very good one indeed =3
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lol, i knew someone would come up wanting to kill those people XD lol, then you'd have to kill all the people who raped poor little *smirk* Yoru who is raped by *quite* a few men.
~Kuro Tenshi LL
Monday, June 20th 2005 - 08:53:51 PM

IcyHalite [e] [h]
Wow, I started reading your manga just a good 15 minutes ago, and it was awesome! The art's nice and the story's cool. I got thrown off by the names in the beginning but it cleared out pretty fast. I like this a lot! Update more~
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thankies ::bows:: lol, the names are confusing i know, but it has something to do with the past of the main characters... i think i will draw two prequals after i finish this.
~Kuro Tenshi LL
Monday, June 20th 2005 - 02:12:02 AM

Elihn [e] [h]
Heya,
found your comic two days ago and I find it really interesting. Though you don't have to torture poor Yoru so much.
No need for fanservice, your comic still would be good without an SM-Yaoi-scene.
Well, that's my humble opinion.

However, I'm curious of what will become of the relationship between Yoru and Chris.
I read that Yoru is straight but well, it seems Chris likes to change his sexuality..or am I seeing ghosts? @.@
Gosh, I'm babbling..

Yours sincerely
Elihn aka Anni
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lol, i love torturing Yoru. I love torturing my characters because I ish weird, it makes me happy. Lol, and the relationship between Chris and Yoru... well... right now I'm carrying away and not focusing on the plot that this manga was supposed to have. But We'll get there with my fast (right now not so fast) updates because... i already thought it up.
~Kuro Tenshi LL
Monday, June 13th 2005 - 10:02:17 AM

Spiff [e] [h]
Hallo there, LL. I fancy your site, tis perfectly morbid and sweet. Hopefully it'll go pro. ^^ Good luck to you. <3

Spiffy
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XD Spiffai XD ::glomps::
~Kuro Tenshi LL
Wednesday, June 8th 2005 - 02:38:07 PM

The Sylent One [e] [h]
^_^ your comic is so...how can I say?...can't say but its something...good...better than good and great and awsome and um yeah. o.O except sometimes I get confused on who is who...with teh twins >.<, but either way,um...keep up the um good? great? fantastic? something bigger than those words...work...^ ^
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*bows* I ish flattered. I hope you will clear things up as you read XD
~Kuro Tenshi LL
Tuesday, June 7th 2005 - 11:36:33 AM

...........
awwww but I like the lots of updates! Ah well ^.^ I looove your comic. ^.^ * wanders off to read it all over again*
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Lol, i'm not spending enough effort so right now I'm going back and darkening the lines so the scans would turn out clearer.
~Kuro Tenshi LL
Monday, June 6th 2005 - 03:31:15 AM

Sephrenia [e]
This is an absolutely beautiful webcom. I wish you were more consistent with your updates. In other words, I want more. ^^ Wonderful work.

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ooh i ish flattered. i have so much to say but i'm trying not to reveal every secret that fast. i am drawing more, normally i update every 1~3 days ;-)
~kuro tenshi LL
Friday, May 27th 2005 - 03:15:20 PM

Great EMF [e]
Your comic is too cute! Hope to read more. =^.^= ((your layout is beautiful by the way))

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thankyou XD i shall draw more XD
~kuro tenshi LL
Sunday, May 22nd 2005 - 08:40:11 AM

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