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| Name: | cresentia nissye |
| E-mail address: | cresentia_nissye@msn.com |
| Comments: | hi...
what's wrong I do write I can't see it. It's too long or what??? can some one tell me what's going on??? Thank you |
| Name: | cresentia nissye |
| E-mail address: | cresentia_nissye@msn.com |
| Comments: | INDONESIA I WANT TO CRY
Indonesia I wan to cry now, Why this happen again and again, Can every persons have respected for each other, Can you know how my feel now Indonesia?? I got hurts, pain and disappointed, I try hard to face this life with good, Stand in my legs how hard that is...... No matter how ......... But why..... Why...... Sharp words again I must to hear it, Where is good words can I hear, When the nice words come for me?? Indonesia I want to cry, I hope you now hear me, I hope you someday can understand me, I also human like as other, Please put me without hurts, pain and disappointed. Indonesia how you always smile, Year by year hope you can more good, Year by year I hope human will be can think more better, Year by year I hope can respect each others. |
| Name: | cresentia nissye |
| E-mail address: | cresentia_nissye@msn.com |
| Comments: | INDONESIA I WANT TO CRY
Indonesia I wan to cry now, Why this happen again and again, Can every persons have respected for each other, Can you know how my feel now Indonesia?? I got hurts, pain and disappointed, I try hard to face this life with good, Stand in my legs how hard that is...... No matter how ......... But why..... Why...... Sharp words again I must to hear it, Where is good words can I hear, When the nice words come for me?? Indonesia I want to cry, I hope you now hear me, I hope you someday can understand me, I also human like as other, Please put me without hurts, pain and disappointed. Indonesia how you always smile, Year by year hope you can more good, Year by year I hope human will be can think more better, Year by year I hope can respect each others. |
| Name: | cresentia nissye |
| E-mail address: | cresentia_nissye@msn.com |
| Name: | brahim fahr |
| E-mail address: | bbfahr@hotmail.com |
| Comments: | nothing but poetry can make me feel dizy, of course if i can read behind the lines. please keep writing pals and live the beauty and mgic of the lines |
| Name: | nissye cresentia |
| E-mail address: | cresentia_nissye@msn.com |
| Comments: | Event I closed my eyes I remember u.
Event I want to go I want smile to u. Before I sleep I see u n feel nice, But in the corner of my heart still hurt, Till when this gone I never know, Just the time can answer me. |
| Name: | CLEOPATRA |
| E-mail address: | 0828368560@VODAMAIL.CO.ZA |
| Name: | CLEOPATRA |
| E-mail address: | 0828368560@VODAMAIL.CO.ZA |
| Name: | Stalzer |
| E-mail address: | stalzerb@sbcglobal.net |
| Homepage URL: | http://stalzerwritting |
| Comments: | Writting is fun and not only does it let you streach your mind it also can help you learn. When I am on my freetime I write read or here. |
| Name: | emily |
| E-mail address: | hardyharhar415@aol.com |
| Comments: | email me, please please please |
| Name: | PRINCESS MALOPE |
| E-mail address: | PRINCESSMALOPE@WEBMAIL.CO.ZA |
| Comments: | THE FIRST TIME I SAW THE SITE I WAS SUPRISED I LOVED EVERYTHING ABOUT IT. AS A WRITTER I NOW HAVE A POETRY CLUB WERE WE HELP EACH OTHE IN OUR RELATIONSHIP OF WRITTING .U CAN SEE SOME OF MY POETRY IN AN ANTHOLOGY OF VERSE TITTLE DTRIALLS AND TRIBULATIONS AND THE POEM IS GOODBYE.WE NEED SOME SPONSORS THOUGH AS NOW THE CLUB IS GROWING MORE AND MORE EVERYDAY.
THANK YOU |
| Name: | Shannon |
| E-mail address: | caiimybestm8@hotmail.co.uk |
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| Comments: | Hii Peeps. |
| Name: | rahouldeb |
| E-mail address: | rahul_deb_delhi@yahoo.co.in |
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| Comments: | Hello there, it's great to a part of this.
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| Name: | Chelsea Duarte |
| Comments: | I think everyone has don extremely well and you all touched my heart, especially the poetry, wow, i'm impressed. I write my own poetry, although i'm only 16 years old, i feel i have a small amount of talent that allows me to create my own poems to which contain great amounts of passion and experience. Thank-you.
All the best Chelsea |
| Name: | eva aldrich |
| E-mail address: | mcrlvr1320@aol.com |
| Homepage URL: | http://myotaku.com/users/mirokufan55rox |
| Comments: | hihihihihihihihihihihihihihi.
what ? i didn't know what else to write. |
| Name: | Pearl |
| E-mail address: | trisha_pande@yahoo.co.in |
| Homepage URL: | http://www.writingparadise.com |
| Comments: | I LOVE to write. Write, write and write. I write right. I mean writing is my PASSION. |
| Name: | deepak |
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| Name: | farah san miguel |
| E-mail address: | farskie7@yahoo.com |
| Comments: | if things about life just pisses u off...get a pen and paper...then let your hand do the shouting....it definetely feels good |
| Name: | supriti sharma |
| E-mail address: | supreeti_gautam@yahoo.co.in |
| Homepage URL: | http://www.msn.com |
| Comments: | i m simple girl but with great ideas in mind!!!!!!!!
i want to share my stuff too with everyne here! |
| Name: | Lady K |
| Comments: | Life is a journey in which u go through so voice out in ink. |
| Name: | Stephanie |
| E-mail address: | nenebearlil@yahoo.com |
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| Name: | david decesere |
| E-mail address: | bro2ryhm@yahoo.com |
| Homepage URL: | http://yahoo.com |
| Comments: | i love to write and exspress myself.i make up peoples in adventures.i can have a thought be tuken into a big story.im a great writer .ithink this website is great |
| Name: | AMANDA |
| E-mail address: | a.m.diale@webmail.co.za |
| Comments: | I THINK THIS POEMS ARE GOOD BUT IF THE CAN BE SOME MOTIVATION ON THEM THEY CAN BE MORE UPLIFTING ALSO.TODAY I WAS FEELING VERY SAD BECOUSE ONE OF MY SO CALLED FREIND OF 5 YEARS JUST DAMPED ME WITH NO REASON SO I OPENED THIS SITE BUT I DID NOT FIND WHAT I WAS LOOKING FOR.THINGS CAN HAPPEN WHEN YOU ATLIST EXPECT IT.IF I WROTE A POEM AT THAT MOMENT I THINK IT WAS GOING TO BE WONDERFULL.SO I WANT TO JOIN POEM CLUB BECOUSE I KNOW THAT I HAVE IT IN ME SO IS THE A MORE FASTER WAY TO JOIN "THANKS" FOR THE NICE PEOM. |
| Name: | Whitney C |
| E-mail address: | 7762523387@vodamail.Co.Za |
| Comments: | This a very cool site.Thanx 4 letting us be able 2 display our writing... |
| Name: | Kristen Chen |
| E-mail address: | free7yell@yahoo.com |
| Comments: | please make comments about my work good or bad doesn't matter |
| Name: | angela |
| E-mail address: | www.ja.lady@yahoo.com |
| Comments: | hey there people,ARE YOUR CREATIVE JUICES FLOWINNNNNNNN? |
| Name: | scojha |
| E-mail address: | scojha@gmail.com |
| Comments: | I am willing to write on banking @ financial matters |
| Name: | onyenezi chika |
| E-mail address: | onyenezichika@yahoo.com |
| Name: | monalisa |
| Comments: | hello y'all creative thinkers,wats crackin'. |
| Name: | monalisa |
| Comments: | hello y'all creative thinkers,wats crackin'. |
| Name: | Gil Schriber |
| E-mail address: | samkat@ccaonline.com |
| Homepage URL: | http://www.freewebs.com/littlehawk/ |
| Comments: | Just stopped by to check out your site. I have several short stories, from 2300 to 4000 words each. I guess all would have to be put in your continued story catagory.I May submit one in the future. |
| Name: | zwai |
| E-mail address: | zwaigg@webmail.co.za |
| Homepage URL: | http://www.webmail.co.za |
| Comments: | I would like to take part as writer |
| Name: | Chelsie |
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| Name: | Tan Vi |
| E-mail address: | tanvinhat@hotmail.com |
| Comments: | hello |
| Name: | brahim fahr |
| E-mail address: | bbfahr@hotmail.com |
| Comments: | The broken bridge
It feels like a hazy fragile bridge made of wreck. The passerby can’t resist the fear of loss and despair, though armed with strong delirious weapons of resistance. Here the sense of existence is overwhelmed by a sort of a peculiar sensation never been experienced by the lay who care only about living under a safe shelter that protect one from the willing coming arrows of a ferocious warrior of time. The side bars are made of ash stitched from time to time by the sharp blow of breeze that tends to give much more time for thinking before total destruction. You see me there on the other extreme standing emotionlessly thinking about whether to go for it or just never trust the breeze that may turn into a storm and therefore ruin my destiny. I chose to go. I knew it was very risky and fearful but I head for it giving no damn attention to what may happen later. I get on the boat of time and find myself in the midst of attention. I was fake but who cares nowadays about who you are. People are more in interested in what you have and what you wear. After a short time I got off the boat and swore to myself never to take it again. I decided from that time on to get to the other extreme no matter what the consequences were. I began to walk in a normal way trying not to be limp, the actual person I must be. The road was so gloomy and difficult but I keep smiling to the time and to the folks. They smiled back to me but all I can infer is mere hypocrisy. I know I am partially not accepted in the domain but with the effective disguise I put upon, my flesh and soul life seems easy to me, sometimes even happy moments emerge out from the crumbling situation, giving me an atmosphere of false joy, yet fills my heart with wholeness and harmony with the angels of time. I got packed with innate nobility, love and respect. Besides I got fueled with some artificial lies and hatred. This made me the loveable person everyone wants me to be. This made me whole in the eyes of other but a dwarf in the eyes of the beholder. My world is complete complexion of twisted thought, unseen by the other but felt by the wise who can read the eyes and test the authenticity of the mind. Being so, made me a new person out of the real. |
| Name: | Zita Zaslove |
| E-mail address: | zzaslove@yahoo.com |
| Comments: | Was here @ March 3, 2007. Just writing here to say hello and love your site and hope it never goes away.
Sooooo Coooooool....:):):):):):):):):):):):) |
| Name: | FERY SUJARMAN |
| E-mail address: | lambalano@yahoo.co.id |
| Comments: | Hi, Frieds! I am from Indoesia. I want to know my friend all over the world in situs mail yahoo. Please write your massage and send to my E-mail address. Thank you. |
| Name: | John Chebaibai |
| E-mail address: | jchebaibai@yahoo.com |
| Comments: | A writer of contemporary english who features celebrous times in writing materials which are suitable for students who are isolated by immense problems.
John Chebaibai |
| Name: | Elaine Brookes |
| E-mail address: | littlemisspoet@yahoo.com |
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| Name: | Elaine Brookes |
| E-mail address: | littlemisspoet@yahoo.com |
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| Name: | Will Hagel |
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| Name: | Sarah Mendelson |
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| Name: | Katrina |
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| Comments: | yes! |
| Name: | mia |
| E-mail address: | nuffin_but_a_playa@hotmail.com |
| Comments: | i thought the stories were really inspiring and i would like to read more |
| Name: | Michael Ellingsworth |
| E-mail address: | themindseyessss@hotmail.com |
| Homepage URL: | http://myspace.com/themindseyessss |
| Name: | debamitra kar |
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| Name: | casey m |
| E-mail address: | nellyb57@hotmail.co.uk |
| Comments: | Hi thought I would introduce myself and share my writing with you, hope you enjoy my poems as much as I have enjoyed everyones amazing contributions.Keep it up all you tallented writers. |
| Name: | casey morgan |
| E-mail address: | nellyb57@hotmail.co.uk |
| Comments: | Hi thought I would introduce myself and share my writing with you, hope you enjoy my poems as much as I have enjoyed everyones amazing contributions.Keep it up all you tallented writers. |
| Name: | MoreWriting |
| E-mail address: | joanne.beams@kbs.e-mis.co.uk |
| Homepage URL: | http://www.morewriting.co.uk |
| Comments: | This is a friendly meeting place where you can develop your writing skills.
Keep track of what is going on from your personal 'My Space'. Write fiction, poetry or whatever you like and submit it for Review by other authors. But don't forget to Read their work and pass comment in return. There are plenty of Competitions, discussions and Groups to join as well as a Chat Room where you can exchange ideas. It costs nothing to become a member of MoreWriting. Enjoy your stay. |
| Name: | Kenlyn Circe Benedirk |
| E-mail address: | dreams_r2_real@yahoo.com |