
Welcome to Dreambook Poetry Submission Page, a nifty idea from New Dream Network and the Webring!If you have a minute, please submit a poem to my Dreambook too!
| Your Name: | Chris |
| E-mail address: | cvalladares@dadeschools.net |
| She is as towering as a huge tree,
yet as beautiful as any flower. No one comes close to comparing to thee, except a skyscraping tower. Her breath is not even near being sweet, but her eyes shine exactly like glitter. When we go to eat it’s always my treat, what can I say I love to be with her. Her steps sound like the stomping of a horse, and her arms go way down below her knees. Absolutely nothing can be much worse, than her terrible stench that attracts fleas. Through the good and the bad I still love her, no need to change no need to bother. |
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| Your Name: | 477van |
| E-mail address: | 477van@hotmail.com |
| Homepage URL: | http://maxalt.rx4.org/ |
| That's a pretty cool site! I love it. | |
| Your Name: | April J |
| E-mail address: | Soprano0444@aol.com |
| The world is cruel. Losing touch is so easy. Forever indebdted to you I will be, for the one gift you may be able to give; help me find a long lost friend. | |
| Your Name: | Vache and Cow |
| E-mail address: | spambox@vacheandcow.com |
| Homepage URL: | http://www.vacheandcow.com |
| Congrats for your website, we LOVE it !!! Don't hesitate to come by our great little cow world to say hi :-)
Vache and Cow : Cows Paradise |
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| Your Name: | Blake Michael |
| E-mail address: | dragondevil07@netscape.net |
| I AM LIKE A RAVEN IN THE NIGHT FLYING ALONE . WAITING FOR MY ONE AND ONLY TO COME HOME. I WAIT I WATCH BUT I SEE NOTHING. ALL I KNOW IS HES OUT THERE SOMEWHERE THINKING OF ME AS I THINK OF HIM.TRY TO GO TO SLEEP AND THINK ABOUT HIM,BUT WHEN I TRY IT IS ONE BIG BLUR, WHILE LYING IN BED I HAVE THE FELLING OF THE DEAD.IF I WOULD HAVEKNOWN THIS WOULD BE OUR LAST NIGHTMAYBE I WOULD HAVE TOLD HIMI AM HAVING HIS SON.NOW THAT I WILL NEVER SEE HIM IT IS ONLY RIGHT I MEET WITH HIM.THE ONLY ANSWER SUICIDE.I TRY TO STOP BUT IT ONLY HURTS.DONT WORRY MY LOVE LIKE A RAVEN IN THE NIGHT I WILL FIND YOU SOON. | |
| Your Name: | Flores |
| E-mail address: | flores@mcn.com |
| Homepage URL: | http://www.maintour.com/socal/carlsbad.htm |
Wow. I like what you did with the Flowers. You deserve a Star! I have here the URL for one of my favorite flower fields in California. Come visit when they are in full bloom. P.S. Have a Great Day. |
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| Your Name: | Linda Reitz |
| E-mail address: | tumblinda@yahoo.com |
| I walk alone through a trench of death. Darkness swallows my body and soul. The lonely silence scratched my brain and I feel as though shards of broken glass are digging into my flesh. The black air deceives my vision, yet I still carelessly wander through this never-ending world of pain. My body is being eaten alive by my sorry-inside and out. After what seems like an eternity of darkness, a dim light of hope appears at the end of my path. As I begin to run towards the steadily growing light, I abruptly run into a solid, transparent wall. I struggle to find a way around it as I notice my diminishing opportunity, but it is firmly grounded. The light disappears, the wall vanishes, and I am alone and surrounded by the empty darkness once again. | |
| Your Name: | david |
| E-mail address: | daver631@hotmail.com |
| you'll never know,
till you see my eyes. you'll never know, till you sympathize. you'll never know, the meaning of real fate. you'll never know, how much this world hates. you'll never know, that expression isn't just talk, you'll never know, that you're just disdrought. you'll never know, that hate is just a word. you'll never know that saying is just like a bird. words are songs and songs mean nothing words are all and all is nothing. |
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| Your Name: | Kevin von Duuglas-Ittu |
| E-mail address: | kvdi@yahoo.com |
| A New Jerusalem, how wakened by
The wound erasing steel-bone spires Agape and pitted, sanguine pooled, as if You bloodied first my mouth with concrete slabs Remote like spit-out teeth, among a soot Footprinted, as the heroes dash into Collapsing blaze, salt-water streams that seed The forty days of my chest’s desert, sunk In lungs that heave in cloud-dust pillaring The day, asbestos plume we cannot breathe But track, til honeyed-milk in river runs Between the breasts that heaven opens, if That fissure scorched in earth, a clarity Is born of this great city, holy more, Where Babylon was laid, Jerusalem Reborn, transfixed, a temple bright, in stones Hand-hewn from cavities of girdered hearts, And wives departed from the languid kiss That’s buried in the womb of two God cleaves; None know my city now, where grace bestows A miracle, Jerusalem has moved. |
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| Your Name: | Dan Lochner // Creative Writing |
| E-mail address: | typer2001@yahoo.com |
| Homepage URL: | http://www.secc.net |
| FRIENDS:
You fell in love, friends went away, Knowing you'd have a closer friend one day, I thought that friend out always be me - Things have changed, as we can see. You'll fall in love again one day, Then once again your friends will go away. |
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| Your Name: | Dan Lochner // Creative Writing |
| E-mail address: | typer2001@yahoo.com |
| Homepage URL: | http://www.secc.net |
| THE RAMP
There is an opening where people flow, In and out During the day. This is a meeting place. An entrance. And a hang out for whatever purpose people find in it. Next to it, is a ramp where upperclassmen flock day in and day out. This is the place to be. It symbolizing a Superiority for those that were allowed on it to those that weren't allowed. In a way it intimidated some due to the consequences that might be enacted on you if you disobeyed the rule of it To others it was recognized as a stage in life. Being allowed on it meaning that they're now worthy and are someone now. |
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| Your Name: | Longing to hold your hand |
| E-mail address: | mourningtears@hotmail.com |
| Homepage URL: | http://members.tripod.com/~mourningtears |
| longing to hold your hand in the pouring rain we stand.
begging for on more chance but i know it is not the same. As i hang my head in shame has i know the reason why, you are leaving me so i do cry. begging for one more chance to light the fires of a once true romance. I hear the trains whistle and it is to much, Please don't leave me... i am longing for your touch. I hurt you bad, you look away, the pain in your eyes has i realize your not going to stay. I have learned my lesson how can i let it show. What do i have to do to let you know. the train stops and you get on i now know we are through. I walk home in the pouring rain knowing there was nothing left to do. |
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| Your Name: | Dave Ventierie |
| E-mail address: | DEADANGEL@webtv.net |
| Have never felt really bothered to feel anything. a foolish waste of time. i would laugh. such a trivial thing, a troublesome thing emotions are, but now as i am here in my green robes,hood pushed back i kneel before her,holding her as she dies. a look of love unnerves me........never have a woman had such a look for me. i can only stare into her eyes. i strugle to feel......anything. what is wrong with me. slowly. oh so slowlyher eyes close and finaly peace knows her. i hold her. tears rush to my eyes. all that is held back from to far into memories past surrounds me. engulfs me. memories past raps around me. thin tendrils of pain and sorrow wrap around my arms,my legs,chokes the breath from me as my wale travels the wind of the night
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| Your Name: | connie |
| E-mail address: | sxlady@webtv.net |
| terror beat my heart most rapid as the bogeyman came out of the closet
terror beat my heart most rapid as the monster came out of the closet terror beat my heart most rapid as a hand grabs my foot that has slipped out from under the cover terror beat my heart most rapid as I hear footsteps stomping down the hall terror beat my heart most rapid as I know you have left me alone |
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| Your Name: | Windmist |
| Experiment II Poem
Damned For A Kiss~~~~ Brief interlude of ecstasy.~~~~ Barter my soul,~~~~~ for but a taste of your wine.~~~~ Lips, smooth as silk,~~~~ sweet as peach nectar,~~~~ warm as hot chocolate.~~~~ Craving to be devoured.~~~~ The forbidden fruit of my desire.~~~~ In, every thought of day,~~~~ every dream of night.~~~~ Endless burning torment.~~~~ In the end, my epitaph will read,~~~~ damned for a kiss.~~~~ by S. Lauren Bailey copyright Aug/1998 |
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| Your Name: | aegis |
| E-mail address: | aegis@webjapan.com |
| Rain
Coursing down the back of my neck A stark contrast To the condensed steam of my blood |
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| Your Name: | Steve |
| Homepage URL: | http://leisuredome.net/members/LD?homepage=llcool |
| Daily Thoughts for Daily Needs
If we put our problems in God's hand,There is nothing we need understand-It is enough to just believe That what we need we need we will receive. Everything is by comparison. Both the bitter and the sweet. And it takes a bit of both of them. To make our life complete. I like your page! |
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| Your Name: | randy |
| E-mail address: | inkslinger@webtv.net |
| Homepage URL: | http://nada |
| For those of us with tongue in cheek
Do we understand the terror we keep? Locked away from all sunny days to be examined only on cloudy dreary days Poet I am not nor do I pretend to have near the skill as some of my friends For these dear ppl can render a tear, or make a person smile from ear to ear! Cloudy days may never come… since I have now made these friends lightning may strike and thunder may roar!! but nothing will beat a friends smile more!!! |
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| Your Name: | Kevin Lynch |
| E-mail address: | RevolutionNo9@webtv.net |
| When the day is over
The sun is nowhere near And the windy night is cooling I must somehow quell my fears That there in no one I'm knowing Who is truly worth my tears But my ragged psyches showing So it's now I must be going Goodby tonight my dears |
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| Your Name: | BESTGIRL4U |
| E-mail address: | BESTGIRL4U@webtv.net |
| Homepage URL: | http://home.talkcity.com/GrungeAlley/bestgirl4u/ |
| i wrote this for my two wonderful boys! It's not very good so you have been fair warned!
You are my world... You are my life. You are are the sunshine... When it's a stormy night. With your loveable hugs... And your innocent kisses. Oh how I love to hear your little laughs... I love to watch you even take a nap. Or when you say I love you back. It all makes sence why you were born to me... It was so I could LOVE YOU... And you to do the same for me! with all of my love to Zachary and Austin |
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| Your Name: | Windmist |
| E-mail address: | lauren64@hotmail.com |
| Homepage URL: | http://members.tripod.com/~windmist/index.html |
| NIGHT SKY~~~The night sky glittered, like a million
eyes.~~In the realm, powers congeal.~~Cloaked in darkness.~~Good and evil clash, like mighty titans.~~Dominions gather, host of hosts.~~Kneeling in anguish, at the altar.~~Complete supplication, offered.~~Each star a soul, in transition,~~from one existence to the next.~~Demons screaming in rage.~~Never to be one of the chosen.~~In terror beat my heart most rapid...~~The night sky glittered, like a million eyes.~~~~~By S. Lauren Bailey copyright 1998 I never know if I am posting in the right place on your page, Kiss. And yes I know, I cheated, I used both lines in one poem. hehehe Lauren |
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| Your Name: | Mourning Tears |
| E-mail address: | KSmith8235@aol.com |
| Homepage URL: | http://member.tripod.com/~mourningtears |
| Emotions...
I am lost and wondering about, my loves fires have been put out. I am in a living Hell! My body's now a empty shell. I risked all emotions for you, I put them on display. You used me until you were done. Tossed my emotions then you did run. For my heart bares the weight. You doomed me to a cruel fate. I hide now to heal my wounds. My heart still does bleed, I am looking forward to the day when my memories of you will go away. |
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| Your Name: | Mnmoonlight<~ aka~> kjw'98 |
| E-mail address: | mnmoonlighter@hotmail.com |
| Homepage URL: | http://www.home.talkcity.com/GalleryDr/TheUnknownCityArtist/ |
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"Beyond The Threathening" by kjw *5-19-98~ The wind passes over...the dark filled night...Lightning tilts out in bursts of lights! The moon forgotten has gone to rest....the day is over... the storms set in...flashes of memories scorn the soul, of hurtful anger slashing out! When will a day dawn...harmony can last & not be the last, pass any given storm. The storms pass over...the clouds drink their fill & spill their wisdom apond us! Raining remembrance of pain filled in our souls, crying effortlessly in the bellowing wails.. dark threathening & all real! Please flash kindred spirited hopes of heartfelt caring concearn... in all serenity of sincerity... ~beyond the threathening! Shine supportive for doom shall not prevail amongst us to shallow the whole of anyone~ The wind passes over & words of comfort heal...Tenderness in deeds lightens the heart of another! The moon forgotten has gone to rest~& our caring shall not be in vain forgotten, (when is selfless): The day is over & tender~love~care, being shared has just begun...let us keep "TLC": For tender~love~care shared has no ending...join in & always fight the good fight of faith.. Be who you are lowly & forthright in coming~& also in going~Smile to 1 another from within your heart :) Comfort :) & Care :) "Remember Love Is To Be Shared!" :) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~kjw 5-19-98 :) |
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| Your Name: | roving poet |
| E-mail address: | rovingpoet@webtv.net |
| Kissable
Dwell not my sweet on days long past Nor dwell upon the lot been cast Reality, is the true illusion Look past the present.. Look to the future.. Happiness is what you truely seek For happiness will ease your pain Worry not what tomorrow will bring For every day..is a new oppurtunity to live...and too love... sweet dreams... The Roving Poet... |
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| Your Name: | Uh... it's me *grin* |
| E-mail address: | ojina@giasbga.vsnl.net.in |
| Homepage URL: | http://don't have one *sniff* |
| GRANDMOTHER/(this is my favourite*grin*)
The frog/ A tiny brain-child/ Sitting on clouds turning wetter than before/ The dragon came running/ Kicking up bitter coffee granules/ Huffing and salivating/ In slient glee straight at the frog/ It rained/ Cats and dogs and frogs/ And they all slithered and trickled like water/ Across my window pane/ And accumulating stood staring inside/ So many eyes..../ The dragon plodded onto the ground behind/ But the cats and dogs and frogs stared on..../ At the forgotten princess/ Knitting her stories and white hair into a long scarf... Love ya kissie *smack* |
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| Your Name: | anonymous person |
| E-mail address: | ummm, ahh, well,a iee, aahh.@webtv.net |
| Homepage URL: | http://www.i.will/never/tell.com |
| Rivendell
Sunlight dances through the leaves Soft winds stir the sighing trees Lying in the warm grass Feel the sun upon your face Elven songs and endless nights Sweet wine and soft relaxing light Time will never touch you Here in this enchanted place You feel there's something calling you Your wanting to return To where the misty mountains rise And friendly fires burn A place you can escape the world Where the dark lord cannot go Peace of mind and sanctuary By loud waters flow I've traveled now for many miles It feels so good to see the smiles of Friends who never left your mind While you were far away From the golden light of comming dawn Till the twilight when the sun is gone We tresure every season And every passing day We feel the comming of a new day Dark gives way to light a new way Stop here for a while until the world, The world calles you away Yet you know i've had the feeling Standing with my senses reeling This is the place to grow old 'til I reach my final day |
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| Your Name: | Karen |
| E-mail address: | Pigletpooh@webtv.net |
| Homepage URL: | http://members.tripod.com/~Pigletpooh/index.html |
| Mysterious ocean,
Deep dark sea, Is it beautiful or is it just me? Fish swim, Dolphins jump, What great beauty the ocean gives, And many mysterious things may live, Mysterious ocean, Deep dark sea, I know it's beautiful it's not just me! Karen copyright1998 |
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| Your Name: | Windmist |
| E-mail address: | lauren64@hotmail.com |
| Homepage URL: | http://members.tripod.com/~windmist/index.html |
| COMPROMISE~~~Tread lightly, with your words.~Love is
fragile, like thin ice.~One wrong innuendo, can devastate.~ Jealousy, can make the imagination soar.~Fear of loss, can bring contempt.~A vow once given, should not be broken.~Is it boredom, with its repetition, that causes you to wander?~ Can you love one, yet desire the other?~Your mind is faithful, but your heart wants more.~One fills your basic needs, the other gives you wings.~Life is a compromise.~To have one, you must let the other go.~~By S. Lauren Bailey~ Copyright/1998 |
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| Your Name: | Onyx |
| E-mail address: | Godessoflove@webtv.net |
| Homepage URL: | http://members.tripod.com/~onyxk/index.html |
| Words are meaningless...Theres so much more they cant express...Giveway to your unconsciouness...Let your mind go...Let the emotions come together, let then flow...Turn from logic and reason...Allow time and space to become one...Embrace your subconscious mind, leaving the rest behind...
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| Your Name: | calliej |
| E-mail address: | dotcomm@mindless.com |
| Not Fair!~~~the cries aloud and quiet~~~to each other and
themselves~~~Not Fair!~~~too soon, too young~~~too kind, too blessed~~~Not Fair, we sob, Not Fair!~~~but, lo, 'tis~~~for Fair is impartial~~~She takes into account not our humanity and aching hearts~~~Fair is Just, merciful or cruel~~~but still, we whisper, but still... Godspeed, Purple |
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| Your Name: | mepoet |
| E-mail address: | rwdj@cybertours.com |
| I found a tranquil place, one day....
Down beside the sea.... My mind began wander.... I reached inside of me.... My thoughts were of amazement.... In awe of what was seen.... The ocean blue was everywhere.... I began to dream.... My dreams have never ended.... I still do reminisce.... Beside the sea, tranquility.... A place of awesome bliss.... Here, I dream and wonder.... What will become of me?.... Whatever, we are destine for.... What will be, will be.... |
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| Your Name: | dagny |
| E-mail address: | mchambers@bulldogs.org |
| Since feeling is first
who pays any attention to the syntax of things will nevery wholly kiss you: wholly to be afool while spring is in the world my blood approves and kisses are a far better fate than wisdom. lady i swear by all flowers. don't cry--the best gesture of my brain is less than your eyelid's flutter which says we are for each other: then laugh, leaning back in my arms for life's not a paragraph and death i think is no parenthesis ee cummings |
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| Your Name: | mourningtears |
| E-mail address: | mourningtears@hotmail.com |
| Homepage URL: | http://members.tripod.com/~mourningtears/index.html |
| One so young,
how could she die? I will live for now to wonder why. A life so full of promise how could it be taken. Life can be so cruel, and leave the living badly shaken. Has we mourn the life that has been taken, We should remember a friendship that touched our very hearts. With our memories may we never forget how fate lead us to a good friend. How sad it all had to end. This poem was for an internet friend that was hit by a druck driver and killed while rollerblading. He was only 17 we chatted all the time and I was his big sis. I miss him so For those who mourn for purple may they never forget her. She can live on now in our hearts... Just like PolarBear lives in mine in mine. |
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| Your Name: | dusty |
| E-mail address: | dustyone@webtv.net |
| Homepage URL: | http://home.talkcity.com/sunsetblvd/dustyone |
| Our Purple did not really perish~~~~~~
you'll see her words imbedded deep~~~~~~ A eulogy for all her friends to cherish~~~~~~ with wisdom that we all may keep~~~~~~ She is in our hearts for all to see~~~~~~ where death can never take away~~~~~~ the pleasure of her company~~~~~~ every minute of the day~~~~~~ Goodbye my friend, untill we meet again. |
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| Your Name: | sherry |
| E-mail address: | kissable1@webtv.net |
| Homepage URL: | http://members.tripod.com/~kissable1/index.html |
| DAY IS OVER
ºººººº the moonlight cold and dreary/ the smouldering souls quite weary/ quicksand pull me down/ never to be found/ hellish howling/ grim and scowling/ run for cover/ day is over~~~ |
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