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dancingkitsune sailorbritts@aol.com [h] |
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I saw the title of your comic from another comic's Author's Notes page that happened inbetween chapters (Saturnailia by SpaceCoyote), and it sounded interesting so I decided to check it out. =)
At first, the first chapter was confusing, but it was very easy to get into. I don't quite understand what happened to Chayya's mother, but I'm sure you'll sort it out sooner or later. I love the relationship that Chayya and Ruach share, it reminds me alot of the one I have with one of my own friends. =) In my opinion, it's connected to whatever the monster was guarding at the very end of the chapter, right? Ah well, I'll find out sooner or later =)
In the second chapter, however, I'm completely lost. =( To me it seems like you're trying to show us some new characters, and add more storylines into the plot, but at the moment it al seems much too random and unconnected to the plot from chapter one.
I hope that you eventually return to the plot from chapter one, it was very interesting. I'd like to see more from it =) |
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Sunday, January 7th 2007 - 08:21:41 PM |
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laris your mom |
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testing guesting. |
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Thursday, August 25th 2005 - 09:49:53 AM |
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Monday, February 14th 2005 - 04:47:30 PM |
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Go Dorito godorito@midsouth.rr.com [h] |
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If this is the right place. Who knows, I bump into so many places... but if this is, I had sushi with someones super cool roommate. There was talk of Rhinos. And a threat of "Village People" dance-a-thons. Anyway, I have popped by a few times to note the comic, which is cool, but never really said anything. But now... now there was a wierd colliding of online-offline realities.
Keep up the good work. I dig it. |
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Thursday, September 2nd 2004 - 11:22:16 AM |
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alanna puliqueen@yahoo.com [h] |
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holy crap. holy, holy crap.
i just wanted to let you know that when i read about chayya being the character o' the month for monthly original bishoujo, i moseyed over to the site to see other people's interpretations. of course, i figured out that you had to win a previous month in order to choose the character o' the month, so i scrounged around for your award-winning work...and my god! it's so amazingly beauteous. i loves it to death.
and i hadn't been by white noise for a while, and decided that i had to visit again and see if i could find more amazingly beauteous stuff...and i did! amazing.
you rock the hizzouse. and stuff. that's all. =) |
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Monday, May 24th 2004 - 02:27:44 AM |
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Danny Danmphillips@comcast.net |
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I just got introduced to your comic through Saturnalia. I really enjoy it, and i look forward to future strips. Great Art Work. |
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Sunday, March 28th 2004 - 08:07:32 AM |
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nemfx afv_nemisis@hotmail.com [h] |
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I found your webcartoon through onlinecomics, since mine is on there also. i really love your cartoon, the characters/art are so detailed, if your interested in seeing some of the stuff ive done i put a link to my cartoon.. if you do decide to look then please ignore the general crappyness of the first.. 10 or so.. im redoing them because the art wasnt all that good (as compared to my standards now) and it was just really difficult to read most of it, but anyway, i hope you keep up your good work cuz it just freaking rocks :) |
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Tuesday, February 17th 2004 - 11:09:45 PM |
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lyn [h] |
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Feet of Clay is gorgeous, splendiferous, mellifluous, and brimming with pulchritude :3
(now your guestbook karma is +1 :D) |
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Tuesday, January 20th 2004 - 02:02:21 PM |
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Camille Moreno N/A (not yet, anyway) [h] |
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I just wanted to say that of all the online comics out there, your style is the most beautiful to me. You have the uncanny ability to invent characters that are not only lifelike and normal (in the sense that they are believable people), but also beautiful, both physically and figuratively. I absolutely cannot wait to read your comic as it grows. Artists like you and spacecoyote have inspired me to pursue my own webcomic (which I hope to post as soon as Keenspace is through re-vamping). Keep up the great work. I look forward to reading the rest. ::winks:: |
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Friday, January 16th 2004 - 07:47:57 AM |
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'diaria' is apparently the currency in this fantasy world, however quite humourously is seems it could be pronounced as 'diarrhea' like 'diary' with an 'a' attached at the end. ::snicker:: |
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Wednesday, January 7th 2004 - 09:37:56 PM |
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sage [h] |
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this has got to be one of the better comics ive seen. i cant wait for it to continue, cause it rocks. =D |
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Sunday, November 23rd 2003 - 06:51:51 PM |
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C-ko D. [h] |
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.........Heheheheh. My last name is Duma. How fuhnny. |
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Thursday, October 30th 2003 - 11:23:21 PM |
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Hoshino Ai sharons9@hotmail.com [h] |
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Oh my gosh, this has got to be one of the best! I truly enjoyed Feet Of Clay and I hope you will keep up with this wonderful story. ^^ Your art style is truly superior and unique. Good luck on it and don't forget to drop by! ^_~v
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Sunday, July 13th 2003 - 07:41:25 PM |
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whispers whisperflight@angelfire.com |
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EEEEeeee! Coolness. It rocks, it rolls. |
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Tuesday, July 8th 2003 - 04:57:50 PM |
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kristen krys10c@cox.net |
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may i stress this..AWESOMEAWESOMEAWESOME comic! the plot is great and the composition is excellent. i found you through carolyn and i'm glad i did. Great job again ^-^ |
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Friday, June 13th 2003 - 09:18:44 PM |
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Soni nmallen@addr.com [h] |
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I love your character design and the world is so neat!
What an awsome comic I'll have to put a link up for you on my site! ^.^
Please visit my online comic sometime!!! |
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Tuesday, June 10th 2003 - 02:35:52 PM |
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Shane tikicomix@yahoo.com [h] |
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My, I sure am glad that you entered OnlineComics.net. Otherwize I doubt I would have gotten a chance to see you comic. It is wonderful. I enjoyed the story, dialogue, and especially the art. Lots of reasons for me to be thankful. From one sequential scribe to another, pleasure. |
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Saturday, May 31st 2003 - 01:09:28 AM |
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Neko stolen_wish@hotmail.com |
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omg i love your comic book and your art is so pretty!keep up the good work! |
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Thursday, May 29th 2003 - 05:18:30 PM |
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SilentStep silentstep_wolfen@yahoo.com |
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*koret et ha'shemot*
Chayyah ve Ruach- at yehudia?
Ani choshevet she zeh nirah ne'edar. Kol hakavod lach!
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Monday, May 26th 2003 - 04:16:18 PM |
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Jes |
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I love you comic and your characters. You are so talented, keep up the good work. |
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Wednesday, May 21st 2003 - 02:01:10 PM |
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Cayla cay@caylas.com [h] |
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Tuesday, April 15th 2003 - 06:40:20 AM |
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obd (^o^) |
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hee, hee, i guess i'll sign, 'cuz i never do... cool drawings! |
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Friday, March 28th 2003 - 09:27:49 AM |
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Jessie evil_demon_of_darkness@hotmail.com |
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keep going plz! its so good! |
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Friday, March 14th 2003 - 07:40:06 PM |
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wendy lys@seiryuu.org |
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Ruach! Noooo. ;__; Please don't be dead. |
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Friday, February 21st 2003 - 02:01:08 PM |
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artemi artemi7@hotmail.com |
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[color=006699]This is a great comic, Laris. I just LOVE your art style. Keep it up![/color] |
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Sunday, December 22nd 2002 - 01:36:37 PM |
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Carolyn falapup@aol.com [h] |
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Gaah... *drools* Ego... crumbling.... Why must you draw so well..? *grumbles*
I DO love the comic though! You N E E D to update more! More I tell you!
Hehe!
*-* so pretty.... |
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Tuesday, November 19th 2002 - 08:59:45 PM |
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ral@entropyinaction.com |
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mmm...tasty comix. Groovy style + story! |
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Monday, November 11th 2002 - 02:27:23 PM |
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Anomie |
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Dammit, I look away for a SECOND and suddenly there are a plethora of pages! You SNEAKY CHIT.
Anyway, I still love FoC and I still love Ruach and yes, I am a sucker for a cheap bribe. .^_^. |
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Monday, November 11th 2002 - 12:40:30 AM |
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Truewind windsoftruth@lycos.com [h] |
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Great job, Laris! Excellent artistic style and well-written. I'm a little confused, but I'm sure that will be straightened out soon. (Gods know Karma Slave confuses me) In essence, good job. |
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Wednesday, October 23rd 2002 - 12:04:05 PM |
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Kefanii kefanii@hotmail.com [h] |
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I'm lovin' the Clay, Laris. Cheap bribes are fun. =D; |
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Sunday, September 29th 2002 - 07:16:12 PM |
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Shannon wingedphantom@hotmail.com |
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Oh! Cheap Bribe! I really enjoy your comic, and can hardly wait for more pages! |
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Sunday, September 29th 2002 - 05:13:58 PM |
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Fabricati fabricati@care2.com |
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Neat Comic! Liking how its going so far, though it is too early to tell if this will be great. Keep it up! |
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Friday, September 20th 2002 - 11:04:34 PM |
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Kayli kaylikitsune@hotmail.com [h] |
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I wuv my Laris fiance and I wuv her webcomic. ^___^ Write more I tell you! |
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Friday, August 30th 2002 - 03:07:55 PM |
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Kit wolf_spirit72@hotmail.com |
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Cheap bribes!!!! MOO HAH!!!!!!!!
*ahem*
Laris, you're comic rocks, that is all that I have to say. I lurv your art to pieces. PIECES I TELL YOU!!!!!! Thus, I shall continue to read FoC with breathless anticipation of the Things that are to come. |
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Sunday, August 25th 2002 - 10:02:45 PM |
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Sky sky@skyneko.com [h] |
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You mean... I never signed this? ;-; Eeep, Laris must fogive me! I've been reading FoC for a while now and enjoy how it is actually shaded, instead of just filled with grayscale fillings. Though the line-of-sight in gazing sometimes seems off, to be honest. However, I make that mistake often, so I am not one to really say anything. ^^; |
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Sunday, August 25th 2002 - 02:00:38 AM |
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Insanity [h] |
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Wai! *bribes with a large pie* :D Specialbonusthingie! |
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Saturday, August 24th 2002 - 08:15:49 AM |
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tai |
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i sign for cheap bribes AND b/c i love you! ^_^ i like what you've done so far with your comic. the drawings are really cute and so funnee. i like the humour.
YAY!! now all we need is more updates!! :D :D :D |
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Friday, August 23rd 2002 - 10:04:10 PM |
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Jenna sailorio@ainominako.net [h] |
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Wow! I can't wait to see more of this; your art is so gorgeous, and the story's very interesting so far. ^_^ |
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Thursday, July 18th 2002 - 01:46:25 PM |
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space coyote [h] |
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Heyo! I really love your character designs and drawing style. Can't say much about the story yet, but it looks interesting so far. Oh, and I like the freaky mother. Gotta love the freaky mother. |
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Sunday, June 23rd 2002 - 01:27:53 AM |
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Bluefish |
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Looks like the beginning of a sweet comic.
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Sunday, June 16th 2002 - 09:48:07 AM |
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Bel [h] |
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It has been decided that all I need in life is Chayya's hat, and a t-shirt with a wittle happy Chay saying "FoC this! ^-^"
Even if I don't know why this has been decided.
No doubt they will be sacked, after I get the clothes. |
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Friday, June 14th 2002 - 03:11:38 PM |
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Denise maruah@directvinternet.com [h] |
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It is much interesting, no matter what Laris says! ^__^
I know this is true because I read it during a commercial break, so there was no MST3K-ness to distract me! o_o |
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Sunday, June 9th 2002 - 12:49:23 AM |
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Kim Diamond@omne.uk.net |
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I'm supposed to be revising for my exams right now. If I fail iI know who to blame... |
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Tuesday, May 28th 2002 - 11:59:19 AM |
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Anomie |
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Woo! Larish ish talented, yea and forsooth. And I am going to eat Ruach. Or marry him. Haven't decided which. |
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Friday, May 24th 2002 - 09:38:25 AM |
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Z koukijiten@hotmail.com [h] |
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Hello, I'm here to avenge Kaeria's death... no, wait, I mean praise the comic. ^_^ Praise! I LURVE the desert setting. Very Tatooine meets the Near East. Also, page three of the prologue creeped me out. Good work with that. n.n
Am stranded. Please send food, water, more Feet of Clay. |
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Wednesday, May 22nd 2002 - 11:26:07 PM |
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tengu rabid@eccentriclines.com [h] |
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Spiffy comic, I'll definitely be sticking around for more. And I'll give you a link back... as soon as I stop being lazy about such matters. ^^; |
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Wednesday, May 22nd 2002 - 08:13:54 PM |
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A-chan a_chan18@hotmail.com |
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WOW! This is one of the best online comics I've seen! I can't wait to see more. It's got me really interested. Good luck |
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Wednesday, May 22nd 2002 - 05:46:59 PM |
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Laina elainathecoolest@yahoo.com |
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YAY! what a friendliful comic!! keep it going!
senie says yay and oi. |
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Wednesday, May 22nd 2002 - 02:55:36 PM |
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lyn [h] |
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Yee for FoC!! :D ::glomps the Laris:: |
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Wednesday, May 22nd 2002 - 09:19:02 AM |
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etoile [h] |
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Laris! You rock! I love your comic and I wish to see more! ::holds up her 'i heart chayya's hat' sign:: |
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Tuesday, May 21st 2002 - 08:37:01 PM |
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