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Name: Maki
E-mail address: m.grass@sxu.edu
Comments:Your story is so awesome!!!! I really think they should make a movie out of this one. You are really talented. I'll keep an eye out for your new works.
Rate My Story: 9 (love it)
Wednesday, March 2nd 2005 - 04:57:07 PM
Name: Maki
E-mail address: m.grass@sxu.edu
Comments:Your story is so awesome!!!! I really think they should make a movie out of this one. You are really talented. I'll keep an eye out for your new works.
Rate My Story: 9 (love it)
Wednesday, March 2nd 2005 - 04:53:13 PM
Name: Tw.Mars
E-mail address: female_shadowfox@hotmail.com
Homepage URL: http://www.geocities.com/catwomenb3b/classic_blue.html
Comments:hey I just wanted to say I love you site and that I linked you to my webpage hope you don't mind.
Rate My Story: 9 (love it)
Monday, July 14th 2003 - 07:07:04 PM
Name: Jon2261
E-mail address: hd_2261@hotmail.com
Homepage URL: http://www.geocities.com/tribo_69
Comments:Hey, nice site. I like the layout(how did you do that?!) it's all pretty good...
Rate My Story: 7 (great)
Thursday, October 3rd 2002 - 07:18:24 AM
Name: tim Y.
Comments:ey cammy. never knew you liked tenchi muyo.. anime fan ka rin pala.. anyway.. good work. i look forward for the pics. hehe
Rate My Story: 6 (good)
Sunday, September 29th 2002 - 07:18:15 AM
Name: Raven
E-mail address: stratasluv05@yahoo.com
Comments:Hey I can't wait until you finish the story, cuz I have waited for so long for the rest of it. I can't wait any longer and the suspense is killing me I mean I wanna know how the rest of the story finishes!!! Will you please e-mail me when you get the chance. I wanna know if your stuck or what so I can see if I might be able to help. I really love this story and it has a greaaaaat story line. I think that you owe it to all of your fans to finish it so that we all could worship you.
P.S I gave you a ten but only because the scale only goes that far.
Rate My Story: 10(total perfection)
Monday, August 19th 2002 - 08:24:53 PM
Name: JaGuAr3x3
E-mail address: jaguar3x3@hotmail.com
Comments:hey i read all of your story in 2 days.Oh wait no I didnt. Its not finished! Please I am really begging you to finish this story cause this is one of the best ones I've ever read.I cant take this and i need to know an ending.if you dont get this dont worry cause I will be emailing you. Plz if you have any desency write me back or give me some sort of sign. Oh well,you are very talented and this could even be a movie or something in my opinion. Try and sell.lol. untill i hear from you.....
JaG
Rate My Story: 10(total perfection)
Friday, July 26th 2002 - 12:57:21 AM
Name: sailorleelee89
E-mail address: sailorleelee89@hotmail.com
Homepage URL: http://asianavenue.com
Comments:


Hey nice page you have here and like your music, Oh and try having song's with words next time okay well gotta go. Bye Bye. RYOKO ROCKS

Leeleemoon***
Rate My Story: 1 (menace to society)
Wednesday, July 17th 2002 - 08:53:45 PM
Name: Paul Gossett
E-mail address: Paulgossett187killa@japanimation.com
Comments:I like Ryoko, Washuu, Nagi, Kionae, and Mihoshi, Ayeka sucks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I loved youre story I make it a perfect 10. Do you know about a Tenchi Muyo movie part 3? If so, where can I find it??????????
P.S. write back pleeeeeaaaaaaassee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rate My Story: 10(total perfection)
Thursday, April 25th 2002 - 05:14:56 AM
Name: Paul Gossett
E-mail address: Paulgossett187killa@japanimation.com
Homepage URL: http://japanimation.com
Comments:I like Ryoko, Washuu, Nagi, & Kionae the best. I think that Ryoko or Washuu would be a god match as well; I also think that Ayeka sucks!!!!!!!!!!!!!
She's too much of a woose to be w/ Tenchi, he'd be much better off with Ryoko the Space Pirate; or the greatest scientific genious in the whole galaxy Washuu.
I've heard that there is a third movie for the tenchi muyo series, have you heard of it?; and if so where can I find it? W/b pleasseee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Rate My Story: 10(total perfection)
Thursday, April 25th 2002 - 05:07:52 AM
Name: ali
Homepage URL: http://www.geocities.com/distortion25
Comments:i love your story..great grand wonderful
Rate My Story: 10(total perfection)
Thursday, April 18th 2002 - 06:20:51 PM
Name: Demonness
E-mail address: demonness_ryoko@yahoo.com
Homepage URL: http://www.tmffa.com
Comments:I LOVE the story; I've read it through twice now.

But please PLEEEASE put up the next chapter!! I'm dying of suspense here!!!!

Other than that, great character development, a bit too many typos but no biggie...all in all a great story! Keep up the good work!
Rate My Story: 9 (love it)
Monday, April 1st 2002 - 12:48:43 PM
Name: Susi
Homepage URL: http://www.susis-rumpelkiste.de
Comments:Hei!
You have a really Cool! Site!
It has made a lots of fun to look at your site!
For shure I come back!

Cu

Susi
Rate My Story: 1 (menace to society)
Wednesday, February 13th 2002 - 01:24:07 PM
Name: Raven of the Orion
E-mail address: chevette15@hotmail.com
Comments: October 3, 2001
What's up? how's the story coming along? I don't want to
seem impatient but I can't wait any longer for the next
chapter. See you might know me as Princess Aeka or
Chevette 15. I have been waiting for a long time. I just
can't wait any longer. Please let me know if you stopped
writing the story or you have writer's block or if you
haven't finished the story. I just gotta know.
Rate My Story: 10(total perfection)
Wednesday, October 3rd 2001 - 05:46:04 PM
Name: Princess Aeka
E-mail address: chevette15
Comments:I love your story. It's great, I'm actually writing a
fanfic about SM and this is my inspiration. The whole thing
with the girls and Tenchi is jusst magical. I woould love
to finish reading it when ever you finish the chapter or
the story. It's great and I can't wait anymore to finish
reading it. Personally I believe that Ryoko and Tenchi do
belong together because they were meant for each other and
it's unquestionnably true love. But, (not to get all the
Ryoko and Tenchi fans angry) what about Aeka? Why can't
Tenchi and Aeka get together and Ryoko and Detsumitsu get
together. Because you know they have a history together and
it will give them a chance to find their love fo each other
again. Because they did, ( a long time ago) love each other
deeply right? So why not have them pick it back up. It
would be devestating for both of them (Aeka & Detsumitsu)
if Ryoko and Tenchi get together. Not saying that they
shouldn't. So anywayz I hope that your story is finished
soon so all of your fans can get a chance to read it.


P.S
Your rate range only goes up to ten but I actually give it
a perfect 100.
Rate My Story: 10(total perfection)
Friday, July 27th 2001 - 02:37:17 PM
Name: theguyonthecot
E-mail address: jackinjimbo@yahoo.com
Comments:Write some more
Rate My Story: 6 (good)
Wednesday, July 4th 2001 - 02:38:12 AM
Name: Markay Grace
E-mail address: Syanron@prodigy.net
Comments:Cool site! Great story! Ryoko rocks. Update soon kay! Ryoko Forever.
Rate My Story: 8 (kicks ass)
Monday, July 2nd 2001 - 05:50:40 PM
Name: Nick
E-mail address: nick7621@lycos.com
Comments:A new chapter!!! Cool

Response to post below
I don't want to start an arguement on this board but don't call yourself "Immortal Genius Washu" if your going to say Ayeka sucks, any good fans that go over the reasons why realize she has just as many faults as Ryoko if not less, and though my preference is of Ryoko, Ayeka isn't far behind. The whole #WASHU# ML went over this and no one that was involved ended up with the opinion that Ayeka sucks. Some may dislike her but not more than that, many reasons are also stupid reasons to begin with, if you would like a copy of some e-mails of this discussion privately e-mail me.
Rate My Story: 10(total perfection)
Tuesday, May 29th 2001 - 02:37:24 AM
Name: Immortal_Genius_Washu
E-mail address: washu_53549@passport.com
Comments:Rocken Cool story! PLEASEEEEEE finsh it!!:-) (Note: Aeka sucks!!!!! Ryoko or Washu would make a better match for Tenchi, or even Kiyone would make a nice match also!)
Rate My Story: 10(total perfection)
Thursday, May 24th 2001 - 04:01:15 PM
Name: Nitalku Shenlong
Comments:A great story, true geniuse. But there is one small problem, RYOKO seems to be getting to friendly with this guy that was trying to kill her, and TENCHI seems to be doing the same with Aeka.

TENCHI & RYOKO were destined to be together.

See if you can work that into your story's end. Also WAY to many typos bub. Back to the good comments. That kiss between TENCHI & RYOKO ~MAGIC~, Mihoshi's accidents on Sojia II hilarios, and Sasami is still "SWEET AS SUGAR".
The next time you do a 'fanfic' could you make Kiyone the center of it. She plays to small a part and I would like to see her as the focus for once.

by for now.
P.S.
I'll keep reading, you just keep wrighting.

signed NITALKU SHENLONG
Rate My Story: 1 (menace to society)
Wednesday, May 23rd 2001 - 12:09:57 PM
Name: paulo
E-mail address: pbr40@yahoo.com
Homepage URL: http://www.pbr40.cjb.net
Comments:kooL site!!!

-->Check My Site Out<--

http://www.pbr40/cjb.net

Well g2g.....PeaCE
Rate My Story: 10(total perfection)
Thursday, April 26th 2001 - 04:59:31 PM
Name: *Bubbles*
E-mail address: lil_ryoko69@netzero.net
Comments:I've read *many* fanfictions for the last 2 years (Yes, 2
years-no lie) and this is one of my favs!
Please keep up the good work and I hope to see more! ^-^
Bye Bye Bye now.
Rate My Story: 10(total perfection)
Wednesday, April 25th 2001 - 12:08:57 PM
Name: Ryoko M.
E-mail address: Shragos@AOL.com
Comments:When are you gonna put the next chapter up???? I'm
practically dying from suspense here!!!!! Please put up the
next chaoter soon!!!!!!
Rate My Story: 10(total perfection)
Monday, April 23rd 2001 - 06:53:01 PM
Name: Nick L.
E-mail address: nick7621@lycos.com
Comments:I am waiting in suspense, it's been two and a half months,
having computer trouble or just busy? Oh well, how soon do
you think it will be till the next chapter, please post
soon. Does it cost a lot to copyright stuff, you should
consider it.

Seth is weird.
Zidane... that name is familiar... Are you from the
Phantasy Star Online board maybe? I dunno, oh well.
Rate My Story: 10(total perfection)
Tuesday, April 17th 2001 - 04:26:17 PM
Name: Nick L.
E-mail address: nick7621@lycos.com
Homepage URL: http://I had a webpage but I decided it was a waste of time cuz I spent a long time and it still sucked, maybe I'll make one in the future
Comments:I hardly ever read much but when I do it is usually a book
for school and it is usually one that has won a lot of
awards so compared to those this is slightly below average,
which, you should take as a huge compliment, and the rating
of 10 in the next section is compared to other fanfic. I
have to be honest I noticed a lot of typos which can get a
little annoying, but as far as writing skill goes I think
it was very good.
Damn that Mihoshi at the end of chapter 25. Finish soon.
Rate My Story: 10(total perfection)
Sunday, April 15th 2001 - 09:18:06 AM
Name: Dani
E-mail address: animeprincess@att.net
Comments:I think your story is probably the best one I've read! I
loved how you had such unique, interesting, and original
plot while still keeping the true personalities of all
the original characters.(Unlike most fanfics that seem to
either totally mess with the character's personalities or
only consist of one insignificant event that causes Tenchi
to start making out with one[or sometime more^_^] of the
characters. You are a very excellent writer and I can not
wait for the next chapter to come out! (How much longer to
you plan to make it, jeez!)
Rate My Story: 10(total perfection)
Monday, April 9th 2001 - 02:46:48 PM
Name: Chris
E-mail address: none
Comments:I'm only on chapter 10 so far and I have got to say I
really like it, I bet your English teacher would enjoy
reading your fanfiction for extra credit ;) It's a real
nice piece of work to say the least. I just hope since it's
fallowing Tenchi TV that Ryoko hooks up with Tenchi, I just
love happy endings. Besides, that's what Tenchi Forever
lead us to believe anyway. :)
Rate My Story: 9 (love it)
Saturday, April 7th 2001 - 05:48:12 PM
Name: zidane
E-mail address: zidane18@hotmail.com
Comments:HEY SETH J! Why don't you try EMAILING the girl? That might
work... or at least leave her something to reply to like an
email address. Then again, you might be some psycho
stalker =) so who'd wanna email you?

Camille, love the story! It's gets better every chapter!
Can't wait for the end! Hurry! =)
Rate My Story: 10(total perfection)
Saturday, April 7th 2001 - 12:59:56 AM
Name: Ryoko
E-mail address: Dora.Sapunar@mefst.hr
Comments:Man, your story is so cool. I just could not stop reading
it once I started. Keep up the good work
Rate My Story: 10(total perfection)
Thursday, April 5th 2001 - 10:11:54 AM
Name: Seth again
Comments:hey again!
i was just wondering if u hav a pic, i just might print it
and make a mini-shrine of you in the little corner of my
room. I bet your dead gorgeous.... hehehe :) seeya around.
it kinda sucks, the only way I can get through to you is
through this dreambook, I mean I don't even get a reply...
So what's the whole point of my meaningless attempts to
talk to you? Oh well.... I don't know. If you have IRC,
ICQ, or AOL... tell me.
Rate My Story: 10(total perfection)
Tuesday, March 27th 2001 - 05:36:10 AM
Name: Seth J.
E-mail address: ....
Homepage URL: http://......
Comments:hey... i think you're a great writer, just like everyone
else says. I'm 17 and my name's Seth (hehehe, yes yes City
of Angels). Ryoko's my favorite character too, and I just
happened to hate Ayeka (just like everyone else huh). I
love your story, as in it's the bomb! The site's not so bad
either! Yeah, I agree, I'll definetely remember the
name "camillie: in the future. Your extremely gifted you
know... I bet most of the people in your age group are
probably Britney-bigheaded-shallow people with no
imaginations at all.... Okay I'm rambling... Gotta go
before I bore someone (oops, too late?)
Rate My Story: 10(total perfection)
Tuesday, March 27th 2001 - 05:25:51 AM
Name: chevette15
E-mail address: chevette15@hotmail.com
Comments:hey when are you going to put up chapter 25 i can't wait
n~e longer. please hurry i'm in suspense.
Rate My Story: 10(total perfection)
Monday, March 5th 2001 - 07:55:24 PM
Name: Katie-chan
E-mail address: animeotaku1@msn.com
Comments:This story is awesome! Please write the next chapter soon!
Rate My Story: 10(total perfection)
Tuesday, February 27th 2001 - 08:37:08 PM
Name: Salohcin Retrop
E-mail address: boulderjules@hotmail.com
Homepage URL: http://:-)
Comments:Chapter 25 is great and like I said in my rating perfection
you are a great writer I'm looking forward to chapter 26.
Rate My Story: 10(total perfection)
Wednesday, February 21st 2001 - 05:29:39 PM
Name: Kathryn
E-mail address: Ryn@wouldilie.com
Homepage URL: http://www.angelfire.com/ky/Lunicorn/index.html
Comments:I really love your story - it's awesome! You're a really
talented writer!^_^!
Rate My Story: 10(total perfection)
Tuesday, February 13th 2001 - 01:55:24 PM
Name: chevette15
E-mail address: chevette15@hotmsil.com
Comments:hey thanx for updating the page the 25th chapter was great.
i was thinking about the story and maybe even though i think
that ryoko and tenchi should be together that aeka and
tenchi should get together in the story. that would be a
pretty good ending especially if ryoko and desumitsu get
together. well let me know when chapter 26 comes out.
Rate My Story: 10(total perfection)
Friday, January 26th 2001 - 08:15:52 PM
Name: chevette15
E-mail address: chevette15@hotmail.com
Comments:i really love your story. the only thing is that when will
you be able to finish it? it has me in suspense. i want to
find out if aeka and tenchi get married and if ryoko and
desumitsu get together. plus what happens to Red and
akari and everyone else who was in the story. please if you
can let me know when the next chapters come out i would
really appritiate it. thank you and thankx for writing the
story. it was great, every part of it it really made a
visual image in my head when i read the story.
Rate My Story: 9 (love it)
Thursday, January 18th 2001 - 05:03:42 PM
Name: Jie
Comments:This is a great story! It has good plot and all the
characters are relatively in character, and it focuses on
one of my favorite characters, Ryoko. Compared to stuff
like "Stupid Bitch Annoying Ayeka" (fanfics like that are
the reason I don't go to fanfiction.net anymore), this
fanfic is amazing. Well, keep up the good work!
Rate My Story: 7 (great)
Wednesday, January 3rd 2001 - 10:51:34 AM
Name: Jie
Comments:This is a great story! It has good plot and all the
characters are relatively in character, and it focuses on
one of my favorite characters, Ryoko. Compared to stuff
like "Stupid Bitch Annoying Ayeka" (fanfics like that are
the reason I don't go to fanfiction.net anymore), this
fanfic is amazing. Well, keep up the good work!
Rate My Story: 7 (great)
Wednesday, January 3rd 2001 - 10:49:47 AM
Name: Jie
Comments:This is a great story! It has good plot and all the
characters are relatively in character, and it focuses on
one of my favorite characters, Ryoko. Compared to stuff
like "Stupid Bitch Annoying Ayeka" (fanfics like that are
the reason I don't go to fanfiction.net anymore), this
fanfic is amazing. Well, keep up the good work!
Rate My Story: 7 (great)
Wednesday, January 3rd 2001 - 10:47:15 AM
Name: Salohcin Retrop
E-mail address: : )
Homepage URL: http://^_^
Comments:Love the story, although it has one falt like it needs to
be finished your story needs to be published when its done.
And I'll be sure to remember the name Camille when I get
older. So goodbye for now HAPPY NEW YEAR. P.S. please get
the story done I think I speak for everyone when I say GET
IT FINISHED.
Rate My Story: 10(total perfection)
Sunday, December 31st 2000 - 08:42:34 PM
Name: Sam clark
E-mail address: Darklighter@Japanimation.com
Rate My Story: 5 (liveable)
Monday, December 25th 2000 - 05:42:46 PM
Name: Ashilinu Ninmu
E-mail address: ashilinu@hotmail.com
Homepage URL: http://pikachusanimepage.homestead.com/RaiTini2.html
Comments:Oh, great site, great midis, great story!
I LOVE Tenchi Muyo.

If anyone wants to contact me, my ICQ number is: 92417665
MSN hotmail: fumasu198@hotmail.com
Yahoo: asheygirl1198
AOL: ashleydthfox
Rate My Story: 8 (kicks ass)
Sunday, December 24th 2000 - 02:27:33 PM
Name: Roohoki
E-mail address: Roohoki@yahoo.com
Comments:Your site is just what I have been looking for. None of my
friends like rioko or rioohoki!Not to mention HOW THE FUKIN
HELL DO YA MAKE AN INTERNET SITE DEDICATED TO CARROTS AND
TENCHI!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!Please hear
me out!
Rate My Story: 10(total perfection)
Thursday, December 7th 2000 - 05:00:01 PM
Name: Timothy Turner
E-mail address: juraijin@email.com
Homepage URL: http://www.angelfire.com/tx3/animekoku/index.html
Comments:Love your page! It seems that when I make one up, I will
give this page an award! And please do visit my and my
friend's anime page (The Anime Page for All Otaku...) and
read my fan fiction "Tenchi Muyo: The Dark Jurai". Please
mail me and tell me what you think. And for Gundam Wing
fans, we also have "Gundam Wing: A New Threat". Keep up
the good work!
Rate My Story: 10(total perfection)
Tuesday, October 10th 2000 - 03:28:14 PM
Name: paula
E-mail address: paula_averia@hotmail.com
Comments:good luck nlang!!!! it was an ass kicker!!!!
Rate My Story: 9 (love it)
Wednesday, September 27th 2000 - 11:15:28 PM
Name: kaye
E-mail address: ikacute@edsamail.com.ph
Homepage URL: http://kiss.to/ikacute
Comments:Hello!!! ahehehhe!! Sup? hope ur doing k! Gud LucK!!!
ByE!!! I've got nothing to say kasi eh! ahehhe!! bye!!

Rate My Story: 7 (great)
Wednesday, September 27th 2000 - 11:13:21 PM
Name: Angela
E-mail address: angel_smile63@hotmail.com
Comments:love ur story
Rate My Story: 9 (love it)
Wednesday, September 27th 2000 - 11:10:38 PM
Name: Candace
E-mail address: candies@hotmail.com
Comments:Echoes In the Mist is the absolute bomb! Think publishing
kind of material! =) I could kill you for all the suspense
though. jk! So anyway, keep writing. Don't be like me. I
started about 10 fanfics but never finished any. PLEASE LET
RYOKO AND TENCHI BE TOGETHER!
Rate My Story: 10(total perfection)
Sunday, September 17th 2000 - 07:08:27 AM
Name: tisstass
E-mail address: angelmoon3@juno.com
Homepage URL: http://www.angelfire.com/ok3/washu610
Comments:the story is awsome (^_^) ive been keeping up with it for a
long time now and i cant wait to see how it ends! you're a
great writer and i hope u write some more fanfics in the
future, but for now keep it up =)....oh and all you tenchi
fans out there should come visit my site....its got tons of
pics of all you're favorite tenchi girls...
Rate My Story: 9 (love it)
Saturday, September 9th 2000 - 05:25:15 PM
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