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#4 Ryan [E] [H]
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| Thursday, December 29th 2011 - 11:29:37 AM | |
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#2 Kawaiililgrl~! [E]
| Hoe... That was good, but then.... itz gonna hurt later when they wake up, u kno? especially for Xiao-chan.... >.< |
| Wednesday, January 29th 2003 - 09:19:20 AM | |
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#1 Wild Thang
| Pretty sweet! I'm not sure I'm comfortable with the idea that Syaoran was actually tortured as part of his magical/martial training, but given the premise, you did a nice job with the emotions, especially given how short the story was. I also liked your description of the sex: no "throbbing members" or "cocks" or whatever. I hate the bodice-buster euphanisms, like "member" and "pole" and "manhood" anyway (^_^), but even "cock," which in my opinion is sometimes appropriate, would have been out of place here. This was gentle, and needed gentle language. One question: is it realistic that a man could sleep inside another man all night? The sphincter muscle is awful tight, and what about the angles? I know *I* wouldn't want my lover to stay inside *too* long, though it's nice for a while. And while they sleep? Imagine if one of the partners rolled over...ouch! ^_^;;; Good job! |
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Suki to Itte: An Eriol x Syaoran shrine
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