#5 Atsuki [E] *laughing evilly to herself* That was awesome! ^-^ Wednesday, June 22nd 2005 - 03:47:21 AM

#4 Yaoi-Luvr [E] [H] So kawaii! ^_____^ I loved it. Saturday, April 26th 2003 - 11:51:33 AM

#3 Furball "Constant swearing"? Um, I counted two "dammit"s, two "asshole"s, and one "shit," though I may have missed something. Besides, Syoaran always struck me as a bit of a rough boy, and I think he might swear in this situation. Actually, I thought it was pretty good, though maybe a little melodramatic in the paragraph that begins "ohgodsohgods...etc." ^_^ (Does that count as swearing, too?) Sure it was a lemon, which aren't really known (generally) for characterisation, but I thought there was some attempt to hint at something more than just sex. Friday, December 26th 2003 - 12:07:24 PM

#2 Shuuichi Minamino I'm sorry, but the constant swearing on Syaoran's part really ruins the mood of this lemon. Wednesday, February 12th 2003 - 03:53:22 AM

#1 Niko Cool story Friday, November 8th 2002 - 09:44:04 AM

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